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@@ -73,8 +73,9 @@ A person acclimates to their tools. Like I referenced above: No one can remember
 This is all great. Victories of engineering.
 
 But it's still not ok to remain entirely ignorant. 
+[i don't know of this specifically, but show bluesky's unfilled promises of data exfiltration]
 Calendar software is a solved problem thanks to the vcard standard - so an entity that takes *that* from you is trying to un-solve the problem and make you dependent on them, so they can raise their price.
 [harp on apple again for not having a calculator on iPad]
 A calculator is a great thing to have with you - so imagine if your device's owner didn't deign to give you a calculator?
 
-We shape our tools. Make sure the way they shape you back is acceptable.
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+Shape your tools to be sure the way they shape you back is acceptable.