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 # platform as place
 
 [discord message - simulate, from Bat] Why do you hate people on tiktok so much? Is it just portrait-orientation?
-*inhale*
 [Internet Comment Etiquette, the episode with P.T. Barnum] "when your.. *snicker*" "...? ...oh i get it, he's mentally ret-" "WOAHH!"
+*inhale*
 
 I could pick out plenty of low-quality garbage on tiktok, say "this is what's on tiktok and that's why tiktok is bad", just as easily as I could cherrypick high quality stuff and say "this is what's on tiktok and that's why tiktok is great". 
 I know saying anything negative about tiktok gets me branded as old, so let me pull out a reference that's even older than me. 
 [the reference i'll be pulling out: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sturgeon%27s_law, which shows Venture Science september 1957]
 Sturgeon's Law: 90% of *everything* is crap. 
-[note] Well, I do, but not any more than the same for every other platform.
-That's not the problem. I don't hate people or content on TikTok. I hate TikTok.
+That's not the problem. I don't hate people or content on TikTok. Well, I do, but not any more than the same for every other platform. I hate TikTok.
 We should all make that sort of distinction - we should treat technology platforms as tools people use, rather than gatherings of people. 
 When you let a platform become a place, and then *your* place, it feels like your home, and now it has a hook in you.