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@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ you would buy these things, and then have them.
 what a concept.
 [as I mention a thing the vendor controls, have some sort of hellish black spike, or maybe eldritch tentacle, wrapping around an item and dragging it back away]
 What if you gave money to the vendor, repeatedly forever, and then they didn't give you the networking, storage, servers, or virtualization? let them handle all that for you. that's Infrastructure As A Service.
-What if you were on a higher tier of this Infinite Payment model, and *also* the vendor didn't let you touch the operating system, any middleware, or the runtime? let them handle all that for you. that's a Platform As A Service. 
+What if you were on a higher tier of this Infinite Payment Model, and *also* the vendor didn't let you touch the operating system, any middleware, or the runtime? let them handle all that for you. that's a Platform As A Service. 
 What if your subscription was a bit more expensive, and they owned your data and applications, too? let them handle all that for you. That's Software As A Service.
 [exhale, back to normal speed]
 generally the allure is that it's lower *startup* cost and outsourced complexity. Sure, you can't take your stuff elsewhere, but as long as they never alter the deal, the math works out.