possible final?

src/script.md

@@ -21,7 +21,6 @@ Every pretentious video essayist will eventually talk about spec ops: the line a
 [tombstone, Here Lies: Spec Ops: The Line. nearby sign: we kindly request that @PirateSoftware stop disrespecting the grave]
 [skill check fail, rhetoric, trivial]
 Now let me share with you a story of my own blind spot.
-[rhetoric] what the fuck was that?
 When I first saw the list of skills, I was immediately drawn to one. I figured clearly it's the best. If the game is good, surely with this one skill will be the one that matters the most, and with enough of it, you can compensate for the rest, or render them entirely obsolete.
 Other than the physical ones, of course. 
 [some kind of lampshading about making jokes about foreshadowing]
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 the game says that too much logic will cause you to lose yourself in an ivory tower, wrapped up in some chain of reasoning that completely ignores what's in front of you. 
 
 The logical thing to do is fit more information into your theory of the world. Even if it comes from an unexpected place.
-Maybe with a sufficiently galaxy brained intellect, sufficient logic could solve everything, including morality. Realistically, you'll need some "facts &", as well. 
+Maybe with a sufficiently galaxy brained intellect, sufficient logic could solve everything, including morality. 
 whatever it takes. Just remember to open your eyes every so often, or you might turn into a color theorist.