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 https://www.psychologytoday.com/gb/blog/pop-psych/201506/the-morality-guilt; Jess Marczyk Ph.D.; The Morality of Guilt
-https://store.steampowered.com/app/632470/Disco_Elysium__The_Final_Cut/; ZA/UM; Disco Elysium
+https://www.gog.com/en/game/disco_elysium; ZA/UM; Disco Elysium
 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ljzf8ZBepCM; [yt]/Doom Wolf; Can I beat Dark Souls 3 while only leveling Luck?
 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T6_SWfJxYhA; [yt]/Viva La Dirt League; Grinding skills in The Sims
 ; Denis Villeneuve; Arrival (2016)
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 maybe someone should tell Doctor Peterson that that's the exact opposite of the point of arguing.
 
 My sister argues the same way.
-She has one principal, one value: power for her. So when she thinks she's constructed an argument that will put her on top, her one question is the only question to be answered, no matter how absurd. there was a time she recommended me to one of her business partners. when I asked for literally any information at all about this guy, she lectured me on how it's disrespectful to question her. Conversely, if I ask her any question in the slightest, she refuses to answer. I swear i could ask her what color the sky is and she'd produce a thousand words of verbal diahrrea, ending with her getting on her soap box and proclaiming some cause at me, but at no point would the word "blue" come up.
-It's maddening. In every literal sense.
+She has one principal, one value: power for her. So when she thinks she's constructed an argument that will put her on top, her one question is the only question to be answered, no matter how absurd. 
+Conversely, if I ask her any question in the slightest, she refuses to answer. I swear i could ask her what color the sky is and she'd produce a thousand words of verbal diahrrea, ending with her getting on her soap box and proclaiming some cause at me, but at no point would the word "blue" come up. there was a time she recommended me to one of her business partners. when I asked for literally any information at all about this guy, she lectured me on how it's disrespectful to question her. 
+It's maddening.
 
 There's a meme from tumblr. 
-[//TODO: find it]
 some children's hospital redecorated. For some reason they painted the floors red. It looks like a trail of blood. a few tumblrinas discussed. 
 some talked about the color theory of red, i imagine for the express purpose of signaling that they're smarter than everyone else. I imagine trying to convince, primarily, themselves.
 The rest told them to open their god damn eyes, it looks like a trail of blood.
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