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@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ On rare occasion I do get a tiny amount of flak for the practice of hunting. gen
 But I've gone for a gentler approach with some self deprecating humor; i have never successfully harvested any animal, ever. Is it really hunting, or is it paying for a license to wake up before dawn to carry 20 lbs of crap on a glorified hike? I am not, strictly speaking, a hunter. Although capitalism is happy to say I've spent money on products and therefore have earned a sense of community.
 
 
-Sitting in a blind for hours is depressing. Partially due to sleep deprivation, sure. I hate sitting in silence. But what's the difference doing that in a hunting blind, vs at home, out in public?
+Sitting in a blind for hours is depressing. Partially due to sleep deprivation, sure. in spite of how gorgeous the view is, I hate sitting in silence. But what's the difference doing that in a hunting blind, vs at home, out in public?
 There's nothing to do but think.
 I'm beginning to doubt that deer exist. I've seen them, in person, in the past. Right? I'm pretty sure that was real.
 The fact that I bought my first hunting license and have ensured I will never again see a deer is a statistical anomaly, right? how do the numbers add up?