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@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ I've been saying for years to anyone who will listen, get a password manager.
 You could pay a service like nordPass or LastPass or whatever.
 
 pros:
-* someone else keeps a server running for you. Hardware, electricity, bandwidth.
+* someone else keeps a server running for you. Meaning they worry about hardware, electricity, bandwidth.
 * that other party hopefully has offsite backups, in case of some kind of natural disaster.
 
 cons:
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ KeePass exists where Mono does - that is, Windows, Linux, and Mac. So if you're
 on mobile
 you'll want KeePassDX.
 
-Got one? great. make a new "database". give it a really good password - it'll even help you generate one. This is the one you rehearse and memorize and practice. For god's sake don't write it on a note stuck to your monitor. Please. I'm begging you.
+installed? great. make a new "database". give it a really good password - it'll even help you generate one. This is the one you rehearse and memorize and practice. For god's sake don't write it on a note stuck to your monitor. Please. I'm begging you.
 
 Great. Easy. Store all your passwords. You can also "set up 2-factor". Much like google authenticator, except you get to decide which device is standing in for the "something you have" factor.
 an "entry" is one account, a username/password combo.