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 | | | post-secondary escaped incarnation | do whatever but be unable to find sunglasses. (conveniently, endlessly iterable until you close it off with plot) |
 | | | return | bathrobe prime adam heading back to the house. stalks a next incarnation. Next incarnation drives off, bathrobe prime adam picks the lock and enters. |
 | | | bp encounter | next incarnation adam encounters the bathrobe (itself). Gunshot. |
-| | | sale rejected | find some black-market contacts to sell the SD card to. They load it up. just gigs and gigs of "all work and no play makes home a dull burger". bathrobe prime adam shot. wakes up in the afterlife - endless tedious salt flats. maybe some conversation with the soul of a previous clone. |
-| | | tedious afterlife | thematically appropriate backdrop forever - trudging through salt flats. |
+| | | sale rejected | find some black-market contacts to sell the SD card to. They load it up. just gigs and gigs of "all work and no play makes home a dull burger". bathrobe prime adam shot. wakes up in the afterlife. sucker-punched by the clone shot in post-secondary escaped incarnation. something to the effect of "now we're even". |
+| | | tedious afterlife | thematically appropriate backdrop forever - trudging through endless featureless salt flats. |
 
 handoff filming progress
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